Kinda felt it was repeated. Similar stories have been expressed in other novels where The main character the dad comes and is super OP. Overall not bad but I wouldn’t recommend if you’ve been reading stories like that
DAMN IT this book has been dropped from webnovel no new updates for notebook of fortune unless someone here who likes the novel has a way to convince them to start working on it again we are out of luck
That's a really interesting story setting, especially those dark elements in the prologue, I found it's really interesting.Your ideas for the story is really special and different from any other works I have read, I don't know how should I put it, but it's a good different. I'm impressed at your courage and creativity in writing this unique idea of story background.
Quality-wise: The novel actually has a lot of punctuational and descriptional errors, therefore, I rated 3 stars. I suggest that the author uses Grammarly, It will improve the overall writing quality of the novel.Story: The story is still confusing with only 3 chapters out. Therefore it's still too early to judge whether it's good or bad so I rated it 3 stars. Neither too high or too low.Character Design: The characters are fleshed out at the start. We know some of Sia and Sid's (Main Characters I think?) traits so I gave 4 stars World Building: As for this we somehow know that Sia (MC) traveled to the future from an accident. Apparently, there are colonies and space travels in this story, so it is a definite outer space and sci-fi novel. However, again the novel only has few chapters out so it's really difficult to rate this right now so I just balanced it out to 3 stars. I'll revise my review in the future depending on the progress of the novel.
I wanted to read the book but based on the reviews the grammar on this book is bad.Hopefully the author takes time to edit the chapters because as of now April 1, 2025 it is still "raw" with no edits.
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