30 out of 70 is MC's Progress. 70 is explain here explain there info here info there, even side characters will explain everything about him/her even it is not needed. Do you know the feeling of eating food but its hard to swallow? like eating rock π We appreciate that you want to give us good to reading story but sometimes so many BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH isnt good thing.. it gets booring.
I've been bamboozled so many time with novels proclaiming to have evil main characters not only being completely different, but the fact that sakuna was used as the MC and isn't even remotely evil is just disappointing. Terrible way to ruin a good character with your pathetic wish fulfillment is just sad.
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Very good book overall (at least in the earl phase) ,good development, not many errors in the grammar as well,it's kinda like a system story but without one ,the book is interesting, can't wait for more.
Was a good read, looking forward for more chapters!And the names were uniqueHope i can also have the same naming sense like yours lol.Also, I hope you can give my novel a review too.Good luck on your novel!
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