These check in novels are everywhere. At least put some spin on it. What if relationship checkmarks / benchmarks = 1 check in? That would allow the author to focus more on story and can be a convient scapgoat when people ask why a certain thing happens. Or if you want to go really meta, have a reincarnation back in time, where they can only “sign in” when a plot point from their memories reoccurs, and it’s stronger the closer to their old memories that point is. The Protag has to balance using their powers while trying to mitigate the butterfly effect. I don’t know. Just looking for something new in the inevitable sign in genre that trial reads has become.
one of the worst. Writer has basically made the good piece of work a garbage by mixing modern technology.it is really bad when writer is kixing modern technology with ancient knowledge. writer hasn't grabbed that of he want to build an ancient world mixing it with modern things make it loose the interest.
It was an oppressive kind of silence, the kind where words were hard to come by. Ichigo, being at the center of it all felt it the worst. His nerves were high-strung and the weight of the stares over his shoulders was stifling.
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