Long ass title. CheckOver used words including but not limited to,DragonLegendaryGodTime and SpaceDestructionHeavenly OverlordCauldron. CheckThe imperfect number 9. CheckThis story has what it takes to join the ranks of cliche harem novel.
@Ch. 69; You will read paragraphs upon paragraphs of how strong the attack and how grievous the wounds are, yet no one fucking dies. It's the most frustrating thing in the world. The story is kept at a standstill because the enemies are being protected by plot armor. Everyone has protagonist correction. When everyone is a protagonist, no one is. Now the story goes nowhere.There was also this random as **** traveller?? Literally appeared out of nowhere and gave him literal plot armor. So many plot holes and plot armors. If that is your type of story then read on.
Its another OP Mary Sue character. too much plot armor, gets strong immediately, and I predict no character growth. I understand he is supposed to be an OP character, but the story isnt structured to compensate for it. With no adversities, what do we have? A novel meant to be a power fantasy of the author.
The story is good so far,better than most on this site.**** this 140 characters bull****...............................................................
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As the people in the camp looked towards the ridge, they saw her returning with the deer thrown over her shoulders. As the long legs of the animal barely brushed the grass, they were all uncomfortably reminded of her non-human status. No child her size should be able to carry such a load.
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