Come on author, take some bleach to whitening your feathers and continue your novel (return from the magic world),don't be shy, this novel is good so far but there are too few chapters, don't be greedy to try writing too many other novels, remember that who is running after many rabbits don't catch no one.
Ok, I'm not a fan of romance, so this will be an objective review.The quality of the writing is simple, neat, and easy to digest. There isn't much description but really it's not a bother. I actually like that, because I tend to imagine the scenes on my own. The stability of updates... well nothing to say about that really.Story development is cool. We start the book with SPOILER, the MC in a bed with his "wife" who is actually not really his wife. The author doesn't really linger on the useless and we dive rapidly into the nitty gritty. Character Design: As far as I have read, it's all good. Nothing out of place and they seem to have their own personalities. World Background: Humm I didn't read enough to really critic that. But from what I read it is developed and the author gave it some thoughts.All in all, it is a good novel. Just not in my genre. Keep up the good work! **: I've left you some paragraph comments. Be sure to check them all, since I point out some things you could improve in them.
I came here thinking it would be just another bad story like 75% here, how wrong I was! Author, I managed to raise the story to unimaginable levels after the first chapters.What happens in the plot really surprised me and the romance between Ayman and Kris was also really tempting HeeheeIn fact, I recommend it and can only ask for more.
OMG.. yes PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!huhuhu... I was feeling empty when the novel ended but when i saw this while browsing webnovel, I almost cried. Thamk you so much author. I dont care if its short-Just being able to read a bit more is fine...
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The writing quality is terrible. This could be such a great novel if they author actually knew how to write a story. So many repetitive words, sentences that make no sense, and lacking metaphors. It’s honestly unfortunate because this book could have potential if it was written by someone else. I rate 1.5 stars, literally hurts my brain trying to read this book.
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