I, Engjell

Writing quality is good in terms of grammar most of the time but the vocabulary is stale and boring. It's mentally taxing reading one chapter since how dull it is.Chapter release is steady, not surprising for a stale story. Sorry, gotta be toxic.Story development is milked, no doubt about that. The author makes too many questions for things and no answers for many.Character design is honestly garbage since the experience of Izroth doesn't match up. The strongest of his original world but he can't dodge and can't sense anything watching him, you're in a cultivation world that is dog eats dog. Where is your intuition? Due to this the MC's fat fucking layers of plot armor stands out.World background? What the ****? I gave it two stars? HAHAHA, I'm dropping that down to one. There is honestly no foundation for world development.I started reading this when it first came out, I let it sit and maybe I might come back to it later. Maybe I might enjoy it then? Came back recently and realized, "This is just a stale story that is targeted for freshies who don't have a brain to know quality."

Finally a summoner novel, where the summons pets/beast are actually the ones doing the fighting… A summoner should focus on buff/support/healing and other stuff, the pets are the muscles… I am loving the novel, nough said!.

author pls come back i want moree T-T

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This is a great book. Probably best described as a coming of age in a world of cultivation. The path of cultivation is reminiscent of doulou dalu but everything else is unique. Besides how many cultivation novels copy others qi system.A book with detailed characters and realistic interactions. At times it can seem a bit slow but if it was faster based it would lose a lot of the detail and quality that makes it such a good book.

The story is not original. The change of new times has already been much better worked. The MC is terribly flat and unambitious. The secondary including his family are providers and nothing more, he has no personality or charisma, if the story followed a better pace I could ignore it but the background is even worse than the characters, maybe if at least there was comic relief if it held up as a story to read in a queue or traffic jam.

I pushed forward through thick trees tracking the scream. I could vaguely see broken branches and disturbed earth. I kept following that trail, never slowing down.

A  few moments went by where my connection with that now small red dot wavered until it suddenly exploded out to cover the entire fire pit.