I’d rate it higher but because it’s a trial novel I gotta give a 2 star rating on stability. This reminds me of I shall seal the heavens. It’s a good cultivation novel that doesn’t make me want to puke after reading it. I’m invested in the MC and the surrounding world by the tenth chapter to want to read more chapters. The characters introduced aren’t, in my opinion, some 2d plot design. They are characters that I enjoy seeing development in. Overall 7.5/10, would recommend.
Hello author! Good writing skills!I have read this book and it is very different And unique concept to the other novels I have read about fiction. This can surely hold readers interest. here are some of my suggestions That I like to recommend So your book can be more appealing ;-you can use Grammarly For improving your writing.(webnovel also suggest you to use that!)-And upload Your content daily.(as you are doing and send it on diffrent platforms for promotion to attract more reader base)That ‘s it. I hope you can take into account my suggestions regarding your work.Here is my 5 stars not only for your plot but also for your courage to write. As an author I also know it’s Hard to take first steps so I wish you to be a successful Writer.Keep it up!
It was maybe one of the most original and interesting story I've read so far. The plot was intriguing. The characters blend together. However, it was very slow pace. The development of the story is sometimes too slow.
I was really immersed in your story author the mystery really got me thinking.There are only a few mistakes I would like to address is about the setting since there isn't much description about the area and I'm still confused about what the characters look like. However you story is amazing keep it up
This ongoing WebNovel is quickly becoming one of my favorites. The author's world-building is so intricate and the characters are so complex that I'm constantly fascinated by their stories. The plot twists and turns are so unexpected that I never know what's going to happen next. I highly recommend this WebNovel to anyone who loves a good ongoing read!
Where is the end of the story?It is missing at least 5 - 20 chapters to finish correctly, right?Because there, it is: He conquered the last great wicked ... And that's all.When is he of himself?Has his emotional state disappeared?How does he manage this for Suzanna?How does Christian end with the legacy of the throne?What becomes of Alice, will she ask him, or vice versa?With or without the help or interference of Suzanna, one way or the other ...Where is the end, what ...It's the big void, there ...Empty...
The woman which was sitting in front of me took a deep breath, and sighed it out. Then, she opened her black eyes in excitement, and a genuine smile blossomed on her pale white face.
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