What I love about your books are the characters. Each one draws me in, unlike anything else had ever done, giving me this thrilling feeling whenever I read through each chapter.
You should win the lottery for translating such a good novel. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It's not going to be everyone's cup of tea, so I won't lie and say it's the best novel on this site. Give it a read, if you aren't interested in the first ten chapters then you probably won't fully immerse. However, I must say it was worthwhile writing this, so I'm sure it's going to be worthwhile for some of you to read this as well.Review:World Background: As of now not much about the world has been explored as it is still very early into the plot. Though I have plans of creating a massive world with its own history and politics, we will have to wait and see if I have the ability to deliver.Writing Quality: Though I speak English often, I am not a native speaker. That's to say, my writing is readable, but not impeccable. However, I don't believe that it takes much from the quality of the story, but you will notice a few errors here and there. Story Development: The pacing is rather on the slow side, though it is to be expected with the type of story I am trying to create. As of now, not much has happened in the plot, but it is indeed beginning to thicken,Character Design: I try my best to give my characters depth, and though it does not show now. I have already set the foundations for future character growth and hence dimension.Overall an average story told by an average author. Though you would do well not to assume you have any clue whatsoever where my novel is heading. The media I consume is vastly different from that on this site, and my end game will go in a different direction from most third-rate work that is devoured here.Happy reading.
"Huuh, what are you doing? Come fight me!" Yoshino provoke the rabbit but it don't care and making it ultimate move. The rabbit licking it wound, and do it in front Yoshino. It shocking Yoshino how advance the combat AI is, the rabbit knew it can't win with it move, so the rabbit decide to use its the move that Yoshino fell. Yoshino can't afford to continue this battle, while his stamina will run out. Yoshino take a risk and dash to the rabbit, he don't rotate around but he choose to confront his enemy directly. The rabbit make it super jump, but Yoshino manage to evade this time.
Under the watchful gaze of everyone in the hall, Fang Lin walked upto Luo Hengsha and clasped his hands and bowed towards Elder Feng, "Fang Lin greets Elder Feng".
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