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First of all, props to the translators for working through the medical terms and all that. It must definitely not be easy.As for the novel, 'meh' is really all I can say. The author gets a thumbs up for daring to create a medical novel, that's brave and must have done some extensive research, but the execution of characters and story development leaves much to be desired. The MC is rather uninteresting and the "harem" feels like plot fillers (aka unnecessary and dull).
A somewhat dull read. There's a chance that this novel might have an overarching plot or story but for now the first 19 chapters are vague descriptions of the power system, more specifically the sword qi in the protagonist. Every sword is just a qi producing machine? What does the sword qi do? Is it just a consumable that maybe tempers him every now and then? How does he fair against a cultivator? What's he going to do with the ridiculous (and growing) amount of cultivation techniques in his head?This is entire novel feels like I'm reading an uninteresting storylike infodump. Good translation quality but I can't be bothered. 2.5/5.
This is first time writing a novel so I am wishing myself luck by giving 5 star. I have no experience in writing so there may be lot of grammatical mistake. If you don't like any part of the novel you can comment what you didn't like. I will surely try my best to improve myself with time hearing your comments
It's good, but I would like it to go deeper about the MC, how he thinks, how his life has been, and a little more about the world he is in, what situation they are in
I READ TO 186 CHAPTER.Positive Aspects: *Good romance. In my opinion, it's the best part. *Decent +18 scenes. Nothing extraordinary. *There is no system.Negative Aspects: *Protagonist with average intelligence. It seems to decrease as the chapters go on. *Chapters contain many grammatical and ortographics errors, etc. Not quite MTL level, but still annoying. *World-building. I know almost nothing about the world even after 200+ chapters. *Fights. The battles are nothing special. Tags Found: Neteroi , Anti-hero Protagonist. Regarding the first tag, the MC's behavior is a bit confusing. He gets involved with women who are already in relationships, but the nature of these relationships is never clearly defined, which is frustrating. They just seem like friends with benefits, which is annoying because these women are very powerful and have interesting backgrounds. What a waste...
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