I Belonged With You

First, he walked around the room for a while before sitting on the floor with a satisfies expression. After this the essence in the air was disturbed, the small beast was constantly absorbing elemental essence like the night before.

Speaking of which, why are their hair colors so weird? Red is a natural color, but it's only really rust looking and pink isn't natural at all. However, the colors all seem to be genetically transferred and look normal. Is this some kind of weird anime fantasy world like that magical girl thing I saw on TV once? But the setting is pretty western...

"And rule number 3 is, we can turn back the time only one time."

Easy to understand power system (at least compared to most), and a good read in general. Other than one spot I've noticed, there isnt any chapter duplicates, and its easy to read without giving yourself a headache. very enjoyable.I will say that I do wish it had a bit more to do with actual vampires, as I actually forget that they are vampires at times since no interactions with other races really happen, but hopefully that changes later on. At least the items and the powers seem to keep to the vampire theme mostly. Only other constructive criticism I got for the author is that the powers are a bit hard to follow. For example, when he is killing the lower level vamps, at times ot seems he is doing what seems like an AOE attack but from what powers have been introduced to the reader he doesnt seem to have one of those, so im unsure if its like a natural aura or part of his cultivation or what. Despite the criticism, as my review says I do think up to chapter 59 which is latest chapter for me its a great story and none of the things ive mentioned are even close to a dealbreaker. Nice job, author.

this novel is better than previous version