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I think its a great Book i really dont know if its a repeat or rewrite or whatever its a great story one of the best on webnovel and I hope you will update it regularly! Great dont let those haters get to you! Great book keep up the awesome work! Privileges could be priced a little more reasonably though for Sure!!!
Terrible, terrible pacing. Although well written nothing really happens. There's too much exposition and too little story. I could last only until chap. 70 before dropping. By then, the MC is still a 10 year old kid that doesn't really do anything. There's a lot of world building and characters interaction, but they're boring and mundane. Simple things that could be described in 3 paragraphs are stretched to 3 whole chapters. The author seems to have wanted to make a harry potter meets douluo dalu but couldn't pull it of.
He landed in a walking a position, and Ni Yenzi walked forward elegantly like it was natural. He continued walking into he reached the three buildings, where he saw an elderly man with white hair and a long beard playing with some children. When Ni Yenzi saw the elder he smiled a bit, it had been too long since he had seen him again.
A lot of buzzing noises and soldiers running around can be seen in the background. It was a total state of chaos, however, most people would not have any clue until the official report is given.
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