I Became the Villain's Little Brother

good story so far but has a lot of typos. especially with power levels and names........................... . ............................. .

I say we give this a try as its sort of new, I guess?----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Finally decided to start writing huh! 😂. I love your work. The work is very well written, of course, that's expected. My complaint here should be obvious. WRITE MORE, RELEASE MORE. Everything else is Chef's kiss. Also please work on your synopsis, please.

Great story overall similar to other works done by this author it’s an interesting take on what the future goes bad for a bit then goes into a higher tech era I would highly recommend at least trying this story if you like more science fiction story’s if you like this story take a look at his others you will find similar quality

I am loving how the characters are been developed and even the story. the writing is also so good. well, I am hoping the author can update the chapters more often. great work🌸🌸

Looking over to his wife, he asked, "Are you almost done? I'm extremely hungry."

Forster, E.M. Aspects of the Novel. 1927. San Diego: HBJ, 1955.

Prof. Oak: I got them Ash, now let's see what you send come out Pokémon, Poliwrath, Raichu, Nidoqueen, Nidoking. Wow, the final forms of poliwag, nidoran male and female and Pikachu wait looks back at the monitor at Ash and see a Pikachu on his shoulder, so he found and caught another Pikachu. Keep it up, Ash.