I Became The Mother Of A Worn-Out Protagonist

    Author: Peril
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. Generic007
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    It's nothing special. The MC's golden finger is ridiculously overpowered, but he doesn't fully exploit it, which is pretty frustrating. He collects women, but they serve no real purpose in the story other than acting as cultivation furnaces to speed up his progress. They add nothing to the plot or character development.The novel is also filled with unnecessary filler. Every chapter wastes about a quarter of its length on background characters yapping about nothing important. It adds absolutely nothing to the story.On top of that, the MC has an insanely overpowered clone ability. He can create around 100 clones, each retaining 100% of his original strength. But guess what? He barely uses it. The only thing he does with it is send one clone out to search for treasures. When facing large groups of enemies, he never takes advantage of his clones at all. Later on, when demons invade the human world and far outnumber the humans, the MC acts all worried despite how brokenly powerful he is. It’s like he doesn’t even realize his own strength.I could go on, but let’s move on. The characters are completely shallow. Every enemy acts the same, fights the same way, and repeats the same lines. It gets so repetitive that I end up skipping fights altogether. Everything feels artificial and one-dimensional, almost like the MC is in a dream where everything conveniently works in his favor.I have to admit, the beginning was good and had potential. But after chapter 300, and now at chapter 584, every arc and event feels like a repetitive cycle. The story and writing never evolve beyond a flat, one-dimensional experience. Overall, this novel had promise, but it eventually became dull and predictable, both in storytelling and writing quality.
  1. _Monarch
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    "Mengapa..? " Rei berkata, terdengar
  1. kHalzYfo
    kHalzYfo rated it
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    If she just fell down while asleep, something like that wouldn't have happened.
  1. Staplehead
    Staplehead rated it
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    Alex jumps to the side and the werewolf punches the bear and kills him.
  1. JosephVH
    JosephVH rated it
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    He arrived at the mouth of the cave. Just before he entered the cave he felt that he has eyes on him but he couldn't sense the exact location of it.
  1. Lucky00vRA
    Lucky00vRA rated it
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    No… rather it seems as all his attacks to the holes on his defence were parried and then exploited to counter attack.
  1. PilinyTheYoungerBIP
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    The storyline is well paced and the slight slow build up makes the premise and the characters real. The author updates the story regularly and I have high hopes for this.
  1. MisterBombasticZJz
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    The story gives the vibes of a classic Shounen Anime. Of course, it is very well written and the first few chapters have the intense that gets the read hook in reading the story. Keep writing and upload more chapters, author.
  1. SeyitanOdufalu
    SeyitanOdufalu rated it
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    Not a bad novel wouldn't mind reading more chapters of it
  1. Laselo
    Laselo rated it
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    I like it, great idea and concept, lemons are good too. Recommended
  1. DeepakBP
    DeepakBP rated it
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    Hello, I'm the author. I've been gone for a while. I was caught in an accident and haven't updated my books for ages. I have also forgotten some memories and could no longer write the same way. So, I might abandon the old books, and if you ever read this novel, just focus on it.I hope you enjoy it.Leave me a review.And if you like it, don't forget to vote and share. Thank you.

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