"lebih baik aku saja yang mengalahkan dia,aku tidak ingin kau kenapa kenapa" aku mengumpulkan kekuatanku lagi dan lagi lagi aku tidak terkendali dan membuat tangan besiku menguap besi besinya berwarna merah panas dan aku tidak mendengarkan vanesa dia sedang berteriak aku tidak mendengarkan, raja mulai turun dan mengempulkan petir di mulutnya yang besar, seperti bola yang sangat besar dan berwarna emas dan di lengkapi dengan efek efek petir dan itu sangat berbahaya, tubuhku tidak terkendali dan aku menjerit seperti ingin pecah tubuhku berkeping keping pengelihatanku buram dan berwarna merah, semua orang meneriakiku dan aku tidak mendengarnya sama sekali, saat naga petir menembakan bola itu akupun berlari tidak terkendali dan aku meninju dengan kekuatan penuh di dagu naga itu bola petir itu menembakan ke atas langit menyebabkan getaran sangat dahsyat sampai radius 200km, kepala naga petir itu patah dan bentuknya tidak karuan lagi, dan sudah telak kalau raja dark lucifer yang adalah naga petir sudah kalah telak, aku terjatuh dan tangan besiku lepas,kakiku juga ikut lepas sepertinya aku akan mati disini, setelah aku ,mengalahkan naga petir itu.
After trying some more times and seeing that she was not able to connect to dad mom collapsed on the floor crying not being able to hold back. I was also frightened, anxious and mostly confused about what was happening and if dad was okay or not.
I'm really curious about the red ball. It's really interesting how MC didn't feel pain when he received the memories cuz in other novels it's all 'AHH It's so painful' but that's also okay in way. Thanks for the chapter
Hello!!! I know I said just minutes ago that I would wait to post a review, however I don't feel like sleeping tonight! Anyhow, to keep this great story from being spoiled, I'll try to only dance around some stuff. To be honest, one of the gramatically best novels I have read. I look at some of the AI translated ones and it's like comparing Heaven with Earth (hahaha... ha). Then, the story development. You are doing a great job pacing the story with the system in question. It's hard to not go from weak to a godly figure with wishes, so I can understand some of what you've done with the character. The character design is a bit iffy, to say the least. He can wish for so many other things that would make him powerful, but he chooses things that I do not agree with. But once again, I know you're compensating. Besides that, the characters have very unique personalities that I can actually relate to, which makes reading this a lot more enjoyable.The updating stability is... Uh......... Just make sure to keep up with the story. The world background is pretty basic. I like the exclusion of manuals; that concept always drives me nuts. The reason I'm rating this 5 stars is because it can further develop. I'm intrigued by the empires being included in the Murim and the dynamics between classes and cultivators.I have really enjoyed this so far and hope you can keep it up... Also, you know what I'm hoping for later. I'll be waiting...
Well would you look at that, new pearl in the middle of the ocean, all alone. Good thing I’ve found it first, as it will allow me to inspect it alone, I sure hope no one else would come. That would be horrible, oh totally.
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