I Became Invincible at the Opening

Confuso demais, nada faz sentido.
Se quiser ler jogue seu cérebro no lixo antes.
Pura besteira, o autor simplesmente escreveu qualquer coisa e torceu que desse certo algo que claramente não aconteceu.

Great follow up to the first story. Grammar is still a small issue, but the plot line is good, and the intimate scenes are steamy! I really enjoyed this story, and I’ll be reading the next story from this author.