Mediocre at best, seems like a newbie writerShort chapters with little or useless information which makes them boring, chapters 26-35 can be shortened and edited to 1 or 2 chapters.Cheat could be explained better and the whole cultivation system is still unclear, until now talents were only people from influencial families that received lots of resources. MC seems gutsy or ignorant, being so weak, but acting all mighty with fmc that is a few major realms higher.Usual face slapping, but done in a poor manner, starting from mc being uderstimated and badmouthed then he does something amazing and everyone is shocked to the core, but still continue to look down on him and hope that he will fail...
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I had only read up to pair games (almost 20 chapters). The reason is simple.1. Grammar sucks. Author either is at A2 level of english or just uses GTranslate. Possibly both. No, it's more like he is B1 for a paragraph and then, the next paragraph is straight out of MTL.2. Trans. This is just my personal preference, but I am not really into *Spoiler* 40-old man leaning on our young mc, falling in love with him, turning girl outside games, falling in love even more, and turning into 40-year old man in-game. Those conversations of:" Would you marry me if I turned back to man?" Made me sick. Again, this is not sickening to anyone (obv, since author seems to have such fetish), but to me, it is. Whoever reads this, be careful, cuz they may even kiss in the near future in their male forms. *Spoiler*Outside of that, the idea was good. Actually good. No wonder it won the prize. Author, if you wish to actually make it big, please just don't do sick things and find a proper editor or use a software, I recommend grammarly.
I just want to take the time to say that if there ever was a game that only allowed one person into the closed beta, then that game would be a mess full of nothing but bugs and glitches. Why would anyone want to read a novel so obviously sprinkled with opportunities for plot armor? Us, as readers, should have more self respect.Oh and webnovel should finish translating all the novels it's previously dropped instead of dragging more novels in here that it won't finish translating.
Aparte de algunos errores de ortografía y gramática, esta novela es una de las mejores novelas para una lectura ligera. No quiero agregar spoilers para arruinar la diversión y solo puedo decir que no te arrepentirás.
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