The story plot is good and characters design as well but but the way you write the convo and the person who converse made me confused maybe because its different form from what i have usually read. But this is only my opinion and so far its quite interesting. More power to you and write more
Hi Author i read your novel it is good and interesting but I feel there are little errors and not that clear. I think you need to edit your work except that everything is fine.
I liked your novel.my best wishes to you.
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I liked your novel.my best wishes to you.