I give you my support here, the start is really interesting and well written, keep going it's a good work you are doing with this story, it has potential and I'm sure that it will improve as it will be released :)
Good premise, how ever terrible..... well, everything else. Characters are so 1 dimensional. That everyone that's not on the side of the main character is a bad person.There's no logic to how the main character gets his rewards, it just shows up, blatant plot armor, which I find is just terrible story telling. World building is terrible, like it doesn't tell me if the company that the main character just happens to fall in his lap is suppose to bigger, smaller, or equal to the power of his father/mother-in-law company/family. Story is terrible written, only a good read if you're in a brainless mood.
Alright so imo this novel is worth a 4.6 even though its got good pacing and update stability. My problems for this novel are the story development and world background. Now don't get me wrong the story develops at a nice steady pace but all the traing could be sped up. Now my problem with the world background is that not much is known, like for example the MC doesn't know what the knights Academy is called this is just lazy writing in my opinion. Author could've said something along the lines of 'my "friend" Carl was supposed to be working on its story' or 'That "bastard" Carl was always slow in his work while goofing off' this is a way to slowly hint at the otherworld whilst also giving off slight info as a reason instead of resorting to the previously sloppy story background. Don't get me wrong I don't hate this novel I just have high expectations for it so forgive me if I'm hard on you Author I just love your novel and don't want it to fail.
I think the synopsis is really captivating and it's really interesting and I really want to read more. I'm looking forward to reading more, continue your great work Author.
As of around 20 chapters in, I am really enjoying it. The starting concept confused me a bit, but once the story got into the meat, it greatly improved. I really like the concept so far, and I am excited to see where it goes.
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