Hunter of the Dark Lands

i havent read much and as such i wont be rating story as a whole. it may get better, but i just couldnt go past first 3 chapters. from style of writing, to actual conversations to story development it just screamed immaturity. maybe author has good idea for story, but it lacks in implementation.

Please maintain the pace well, and don't rush to add more women in short time. It's kinda annoying if you add too many women in short time.

Fuck, the female character in this novel pisses me off. 💩🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬😡😡😡😠😠😠👎👎👎👎👎👎👎...............................................................

I wouldn't recommend this novel to anyone who isn't a masochist, because it's really frustrating how dumb the mc is................................

Friend I read your novel and the truth has a future, it would be great if you could create a group of girls like @danbilzerian, on a separate topic visit your patreon with the intention of sponsoring, but I saw that you have no advance chapter and being honest 10 dollars as the only subscription  It is somewhat expensive, but in general the novel is good, keep it up;) (It would be great for your protagonist to create her own brand, and dress her girls with it as the man named above)

Pls update faster .. cant wait😂 im a new fan 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

was good but unnecessary filler and severely underpowered MC make drop this

the book is really good. It's been a while since I've picked something up on Web novel and haven't been able to put it down. it gets dark and twisted at times. but everyone needs that little bit of darkness in their life. only downfall is waiting for the next chapters to release 😭