Office romance 🥰I'm in love with this genre and this story is definitely promising. I love how the author tries to show the fl as a normal person who has the usual perspective of her boss.Overall it's a good story
Hey guys, whirlwind here, I'm sorry I haven't updated for almost two weeks now, but I kinda contacted a disease and I had to go for surgery. It was successful, but now I'm trying to recover from it, so I might still not release any chapters this week, but any little I can write, I'll try my best!Shameless blackmail: You guys can help me feel better and recover faster if you send me some power stones and golden tickets! and unlocking privileged chapters!!
Ok so I'm making this review of your novel all because I've been curious as to what it was like, first of all your grammar it's not bad but its also not great for example in some lines where you should be using past tense words you use their present tense, and the way your wrote his "system" was too long, and to be fair I was like that too when I first started writing you can correct that by breaking down his system instead of putting everything all at once, that's all tbh I made this cuz of your review on my novel a couple days ago and to be honest with you there's nothing wrong with my English and my novel isn't that bad, I just came back to writing after a whole year of taking a break so...
Mandatory 5 star Author Review here to help you decide if you should read this story or not, in case you are not convinced by the synopsis.This book will not contain smut, NTR, Yuri or any of those stuff.It will however have gave an annoyance, suspense, excitement, and cliffhangers. If you enjoy character driven stories with a wise MC this is definitely the book for you and I implore you to try atleast first 10 chapters before deciding if you wish to keep reading or not.
to be honest I really like this noval the emotions ,the comedy scenes, the face slapping moments, the expense, and the originality which is not seen in many noval in now date . and the way you express the R- 18 chapter is perfect. there are many novle I see that the whole noval are filled with R 18 chapters which had no emotion no character development no build up and this thing I really respect the author the way he express this. you should try this noval at least give a chance to read a free chapters .😄👍
Bro!!! How did I copy you without even knowing your book exists!!!!😂😅anyhow. It’s not word for people to write similar thoughts but kudos brother, yours seems even more interesting and devastating than mine lol good luck brother 😊
Seems decent enough. Drop a 100 chapters. Seriously keep it up brother, if this had a 100 chapters more I believe that it would be one of the better stories on this app.
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