wait in her sisters book which I cant believe it ended poorly rushed it .Why didn't you let us know about this book I was wondering what happened more about Juniper
Although sometimes you feel off by some sentences there is only 1 or 2 per 2-3 chapters so writing quality is one of the highest i ever seen.Story development feels pretty good too without all those constant faceslap ,backstab.Romantic subplot is instead of heavendefying worldshattering G cup thing waisted beaty falling in to mc's hands its just a pretty girl with a tragic backstory, harbouring geniune feelings towards each other.
I'm just gonna go ahead and give it a 5 for the potential this story has. I do hope the MC does not act childish and ridiculous in the future. In my opinion, for this type of story I prefer a low-key 'mysterious' and OP MC. If I had to criticize, it would be how the conversation between the Admin and MC doesn't feel realistic and flow properly. I'm going to end this review short and keep up the good work Author-san!
The first part had alot of descriptions, but aside from that its all good, The world is variedThe characters are goodAnd the mc is, not sure at the moment, but ill add when i do.
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