MC:do you believe that i can turn into a fish and slip in your vital yin?Girl:noMC:ok *poof* *MC turn into a fish*Girl:AH.......*moans*👌👌👌👌👌🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐠🐟🐟🐟🐠🐟🐠🐠🐠🐠🐟🐠🐠🐠🐟🐠🐠🐟🐠🐠🐟🐟🐠🐠🐠🐟🐟🐠🐠🐟🐠🐠
A new take on MHA fanfic with not starting as a kid and studying heroics. The premise is good and the path is promising. I just read the first chapter, but I couldn't stand the grammar, so for now I will only rate it 3 star. I hope the author will find a good editor since the story has huge potential. I will come back and rate it higher once this story is edited well. Cheers!
Читать можно. Но желательно было бы добавить больше глав. .......................................................................................................................
Really enjoying this so far. If I had one major problem is that at times too much 'stuff' (read plot development) is happening and thus character development takes a back seat. I would like to see things slow down a bit so we can get some more character development, especially between the MC and his ladies.
I didn’t read yet, I’ll do that after I do the review because Author I freaking enjoyed your synopsis🤣🤣🤣 and the author’s personal review as well. 👍👍👍 hope you stick with this novel cause it does sound like it will be a good enjoyable read.
"I don't know, he didn't say anything to me before leaving. But he already made it clear he wouldn't come to our aid during our time on the island so we're on our own from here on out.
Li Jun was angry that everytime he had wanted to go to a gathering as a couple, Yu Yan always said that she was not ready. He had to attend them mostly alone. The few times they did attend she was always looking over her shoulders worried her co workers might be in attendance as well.
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