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  1. VoidErbus
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    And? For a cultivator that's less than a blink of an eye, you booger eater.
  1. ssyunuss2
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  1. Tommyky
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    This adorable ideal seems to revolve around treating slaves gently in bed, with consequences for mistreatment, like having slaves dine on the floor unless allowed otherwise. It aims to present a vanilla-centric kink, emphasizing consent at every turn. However, the dynamic lacks authenticity – masters constantly asking for permission and focusing on the slave's pleasure rather than dominance. Love is not the driving force here, but rather a lack of assertiveness from the supposed master.

    The portrayal of "punishments" is weak, such as silent sex, which essentially becomes a form of pampering rather than discipline. The story fails to explore the deeper, more intense aspects of the slave/master dynamic, opting for a mundane and unadventurous scenario that could easily be replicated with mutual consent without any legal repercussions.

    The slave's rights are portrayed as extensive, with mild "punishments" like watching them masturbate or gentle roughness. It reads more like an idealized fantasy than a genuine exploration of the kink. The author appears to be avoiding the darker aspects due to fear, turning the "slave/master" dynamic into a tame certification of owning a maid, rather than an intense power exchange.

    The most risqué element mentioned was a passing comment about some masters walking their sexual slaves bare, but even that was never acted upon, causing discomfort for the main character. Overall, this portrayal is not what one would expect from a true slave/master relationship, and it falls short of being a compelling or authentic representation of the kink.
  1. ssyunuss2
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  1. thehumanbeing
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    Highly recommended story. Read the Filipino version of this already. Congratulations Author
  1. deadmandreaming2bd
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    Your story is good! ?

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