How I became Chief of A Small Village In Another World

    "Carter!"

" Apayang didapat dari Pc Cafe ini? Apakah aku bisa ikut beasiswa?" entah itu bertanya pada bangunan tua itu atau pada diri sendiri yang dibodohi oleh bualan siswa siswa gila itu.

Mc: So Conner when are you going to ask her? Prom is coming up soon and the longer you wait the higher the cost of tickets.

This story has potential to draw the reader in. I admire your work. The characters are beautifully plotted. Keep writing like this. I would like to read more.

Author did a good job on this one, a very detailed and vivid imagination penned down. Though I was hoping for an introduction at the beginning, but anyways thumbs up.

Good story line with regular updates. I love the ruthless edge to the FL. My only criticism is on the occasional inaccuracy of unimportant information.

You lost me when he suffered in this world only to be born an abomination in the next and upon being reborn everyone in his family is obligated to kill him. The beginning really has a way of pushing you away from the book which happened to me and I never came back.

Author please bless us with more chapters cuz I like dis.