This is a phenomenal book written by a great person. The author has done well with what is written, but has not finished the story. This is one of my favorite books on the site and I would love to see it finished.
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You should also make a spy network which is solely in control of king as there are many traitors or betrayers in the kingdom. In many cases, arms generals or nephews seize power and make the king a puppet ruler line fromn1542 to 1565 Rama raya made Sadasivam raya (the legal ruler) puppet ruler.In Battle of Talikota, which had seemed an easy victory for the large Vijayanagar army, instead became a disaster as two Muslim commanders (Gilani brothers) of the Vijayanagara army betrayed and switched sides and turned their loyalty to the united Sultanates during critical point of battle.
😂😂😂❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😘😘😘😘✨✨✨✨🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺😚😚😚😚😤😤😤😤🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧These are all my emotions in this book. Author, can I become your wife? ?Or husband ?? Or baby? ? Please choose one!! I wonder when a famous writer like you will be able to give me tips. I'll wait .. .
The translation I have read so far is fine, I do not know if it gets worse later on or not. So far to me it is about average compared to every other novel on the site. My problems with the story is that the author seems to be completely incapable of building up his characters and the worlds setting naturally and flow along with the story. Instead we get literally 10 paragraph info dumps about everything. It feels like I am reading a text book, not a novel. Not to mention in the 4th chapter, the author gives you the ending of the story. He completely spoils his entire novel and the synopsis you see above. He doe's it threw, yes you guess it a needless info dump that doesn't fit at all with flow of the chapter. It just appears out of no where and spoils it. Over half the fun of reading a story is finding out how it all comes to an end, yet here we see the end before it even begins.
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