Hollow — Adventures of an Anime lover on another world

at first, i had no idea who's the MC was, and now i do know who the MC and the dragon in that world seem to be anti-halFies, but the MC parents and family i hope just hate almost all but one and that is the mc and yes he was a full dragon but at chapter-3 he turn into a halfies from the cube.PS:i'm am now at chapters-28 and not fully know what'll happened.

Honestly... a fun read but the amount of repeated paragraphs worded differently are a joke. I literallly read 7 paragraphs that described "dragon powers" back to back that all said the same thing using different words. Which essentially explained nothing at all. ... the story feels like it was written by a kid with a harem fantasy and a hero complex. Only 40 chapters in and the usual tripe has already been used... such as dead family and only has sister, bank robbery that he prevented, saving rich people and earning millions in just days... worth reading, not worth paying for.

Friends, do you know the kings avatar? I do. It is the glory of my lifetime. I'm looking forwards to meeting Ye Xiu's mentor! Trust in master butterfly, he delivers.

Good so far.                          

The novel is good and  I hope the write will speed up a little bit in his upload of new chapters------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

I think it's my first time seeing a sign in (cultivation) novel where mc isn't a thousand years old virgin, where are the raws though? Srsly

Fun sect building yay!                                                                                                                       

I want to start by saying that this is purely criticism from a objective perspective and in no way should be taken personally by the author.With that said the grammar and writing quality is abysmal and needs more work than I could believe possible for a novel with so many chapters and power stones. While the story and world are fine the grammar and English level I think are beyond savaging but I hope that I am proven wrong in the future by a whole team of editors.