I am a big fan of alchemy novels and it's are to find a good one anymore... everything feels the same... with this book I felt like this genre had hope again...a well written book as of chapter 23... Worth some of my very precious power stones!
I had to edit this in my mind, such a pain. A good novel without the horrible translation, BUT HOW IS THIS COIN WORTHY?!?! CAN'T EVEN READ IT WITHOUT USING EXTRA BRAIN POWER. Bruh I just wanna read not be an editor.
Novel idea. Never thought i would say that before. MC is not a teenager who had his gf stolen by a rich young master, which is basically the main motivation in these stories. Basically, everything is just aged up. But it seems different than those othee urban face slappers, so ill give it a shot
This book deserve more than a five star rating.adventure , magic and the plot has so much potentials! The story line is superb,one of the best book months genre.All I can say is keep it up!
A story I could binge for if author would be so kind as to post more. Our mc is a devil on the outside but an angel on the inside, yet she isn’t naively innocent to the point it is annoying. She has her own character that bursts out of the screen and the intellect to carry her through danger. Everything is nigh perfect except for a repeating grammar issue. Grammar errors are in everyone’s books, but I’ve noticed you replaced commas or periods with ellipses in dialogues and sometimes in paragraphs, which is not so good in the long run. Would suggest to correct at least some since it does bother me a bit.All in all, splendid potential that makes me crave for more. Keep up the good work, Author !
Good read, I like the Mc and his harem a lot but hope the harem doesn’t grow to big. Can’t wait to see how the story progresses and how the Mc will evolve.
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