People say he is stupid, but you seem to forget that the moment he got his search bar, he was twisted by revenge his mentality changed, emotions unstable but it was kept in check by vengeance, you think he would he would keep his mentality from before his imprisonment?the love for his gf is a remnant of pre-twisted personality, and the author was so stupid that he was in a rush to complete the story and his incompetent rush made his work incomplete.the current story is hallow bone, his changes are not elaborated on, and there are many pieces are missing, the author is stupid and abandoned his almost master piece into a incomplete work.
Nice one, shows a lot of promises. Love the plot. Love the Mc's development. I just hope the novel will have a steady chapter realise.I'll give it a 5 star 👍
It's a very good novel to bing if you enjoy doing so , and for me personally I'm planning on stopping where I am because I feel that I'd get more enjoyment and less cliff-hangers with my strategy of wait till at least 10 chapters are there to bing.
I feel like I'm reading from the authors real experience. It seems like there is a thin line between fiction and reality. Looking forward to the nxt events.
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It's a little ridiculous how Leo's stats are off the charts, but in 7, it kinda makes sense. It takes a while for the actual story to get good but the fights are pretty dope. Dialogue needs a bit of work tho
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