It has mystery, it has thrill, it has attraction, it has hate-love romance, it has brutality and what not??!! Adding this beautifully crafted work to my library asap!! Well done Mahum!!🤩🤩
The chapters are jumbled and the story changes abruptly and is hard to find the original and it also deviates from the original raws. The story is a Frankenstein of multiple good novels, for example "My senior brother is too steady". Its story and character development is extremely similar, but sadly where the other novel prospered this novel fails. If the author or the site decides to stop updating new chapters and put some effort into reworking the novel then it might still be salvageable.
Giving a low score for two reasons.1.I always go into these kinds of books hopeful but come out disappointed. Usually this is because the MC does a complete 180 in personality and winds up being someone that I despise.2. I'll remain leery of these ones until I see something that has become a trope happen.
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This novel is made to measure for me, I will read it when I have more chapters, I hope it is good, since I have many expectations...140 characters? really? ok
"Assistant Bae, are you alright?" Han Sooji found the weirdness in the young lady as well, "Don't you remembered? You worked in the Creative Department."
While I like the setting of the story I encourage the author to add some life and twists to the story instead of filling with cliches. The author should try diverge in stories and characters than just background setting from other popular tropes. Plot armor should be reduced so there’s some tension, or atleast some mystery.
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