I'm new to WN as one of my friends recommended me to read this story. This story looks good but it has some flaws in its writing like the change in tense. Except that the writing is detailed and the plot is also really good. based on my enjoyment I would rate it as 5. The author can improve their writing and I'll be waiting for the upcoming chapters.
It was fine until hMC decided to play an NPC role... That's a trap that'll create a wall too big for the author to overcome and will create a dead end in his story.....
not terrible but not very good early on was a nice suprise that the mc wasnt a cookie cutter swordsman/rouge assassin although he more or less turned out at least early on to be more of a rouge at ch 22 since he stuck to using a dagger and didnt bother buying a bow+arrows..... well regardless the author either forgot what they wrote or using some system of calculation that isnt explained but the mc gets a title which give him physical dmg "immunity" note the word immunity 100% immunity im like ....ok completly busted all he needs now is a op shotgun arrow spray and he is god now.... nope nope nope fights a goblin elite? or something? im not sure what it is but he just stands there and then takes 10 dmg..... from what should be 40 but with a cripple its then 30???? but howd he take 10 dmg then?????????? in short author either forgot what they wrote or using a wierd way of calculating cause i dont understand how 100% phys dmg immunity ends up taking dmg..... more like dmg ""RESIST"" lol even then should at best take 1 dmg with 100%
Excellent novel ! The grammatical errors are minimal and its been a while for me to see a novel with god protagonist or something plusThe concept is impressive the Mc really push his limits of imagination not some other MCs that think inside the boxIts a new novel, hope author doesn't drop this
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