His Boss

Story changed the names of people and stores. I rated the rest of the things low because after reading the raw chapter there is a lot of racism involved, however it does show some things in a very realistic manor, For example the Chinese government forcing well off business owners into sharing trade secrets with the government officials and forcing the business owners to allow said officials to take over their companies and run them.

When I read a novel, I like to become engrossed in the story and immersed in it, the constant use of "chickie nuggies" in the beginning completely destroys the immersion for me. It is overused to the point of becoming annoying. Another issue is that the world seems completely static without the MC. I.e First encounter of a boar & cultivator. They had been dead for days, but no predator in a spirit beast forest approached for a free meal. Only a mouse appeared when the MC arrived. The second encounter caused a large explosion which uprooted trees and either killed everything within 10km radius or caused it to flee out of range, when he is only 20km from a large city hosting 6 million people of which 30% are cultivators. Yet no one finds this strange and comes to investigate what happened...  Not even during the 7 days in which the MC passes out beside the crater. An explosion of that magnitude would easily be heard by every person within 50km. The concept seems interesting and the writing quality is not terrible, but it feels like an insane mode test of willpower to make it past the first 20 chapters to see if things start to get better.

wonderful book better than all the cultivation novels I have read and believe me I have read a lot. surprise why this book is not in the first 20. PLEASE NO UPDATES FOR FOR SOMETIME NOW WHY? Some of us are hooked on it so tell us something

I like the concept but MC is too arrogant and provoke sect that has powerful cutivators.I think mc will die if that empire's  king personally  come.but i know even if king came mc will survive .

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Here is 5* cause ggmissfortune is a ***** 4 1* ....thats just sad 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140

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