Money must of been paid to get so high on the web rankings. 3.7 stats but is #1 with less than 200 chapters??1/) translation quality is bottom of barrel machine quality2.) Character is irrational and bland and hateable3.) System is there just to say there is a system.4.) Plot jumps around and story (if there is one) is hard to follow.5.) Writing quality even for web novel is AWFUL
I came here in search for the most deserving winner of WPC140 because I participated in the previous one myself, and I'd like to see how well the participants are doing for this biweekly prompt. I'd say, among all entries, this one is the most deserving for the gold tier award. It doesn't disappoint. Writing - I love the style and the tone used for this. It's light, fun, and has a refreshing feel to it. I don't need to stress myself with grammar pet peeves because this has little to no error at all. Very understandable for a casual reader. Stability - very steady, keep it upCharacters - gold-tier description, and they are really entertaining that they hardly make u boredDevelopment - nice, nice pace. I enjoy the comedy and the seemingly easy flow of the story's progression World - vet vivid imagery, keep it up again! Good luck! Hope u win! Read this everyone!
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This is a truly breathtaking and captivating story. Well done. The world building, the characters, everything is impressive. This story seamlessly blends it's ideas into a fantastic narrative.
Suddenly Lili felt extremely giddy and she was finding it difficult to move even an inch. She just stood at her spot unblinkingly, vaguely listening to Aaron's cries as the fire was threatening to engulf them. But she stared with wide eyes at the fire, as if prepared to drown in the sea of flames.
Her presence and Ciel's friendship were the best part of my day-to-day life. Her smile soothed my soul more than anyone could ever imagine and from my very first memory, her presence was one I cherished above all else. My cousin, on the other hand, was the closest thing to a true equal to me there ever was or likely will ever be. He was not too cunning, not for a long shot for what I see, but he was almost as smart as me when it comes to strategy when he wants to and his intelligence in other areas is much higher than my own even if he is too reclusive to my tastes.
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