Excellent Work. I like the MC's character.Haven't shown much about the world background as of chapter 8. Very few writing mistakes and good execution. Now if only there were more chapter updates than that would be perfect.
Now this is a very unique and interesting story! Author has explained things in such an intricate way that I could feel the world as I read, not in a boring way but in a concise way that keeps me engaged. The pacing is very good. How the author times the events make it seem natural (in a fantasy way of course) and authentic, and I love that! Speaking of which, the characters feel real! Cedric, or the MC's actions make sense, and the dialogue feels natural as well.World-building is also expansive, and it gets even better as the plot progresses! This novel has tons of potential, like I mean TONS of potential. I see what you're cooking here, and I know I'm tasting some gourmet here. Keep up the work! Can't wait to see more!
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