Hey, the Male God seems to be teasing me!

Great book! Keep it up dear

One of the best Xianxia story. The comedy is good, MC is getting "wiser" and develop really well. at the middle and the last update many words of wisdom that can teach you about life and stay true about your dao of heart.

Just because raws are complete doesn't mean he didn't rush ending to complete. Also the translator/editor will probably drop. They haven't been finishing anything despite their promises. Classic Chinese promises can't buy you salt water in the ocean.

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Stereotypical opening MC is reborn and wants revenge for the original body. Just once, I would like for an MC to say screw that. Anywho ignoring my tangent the plot moves quick enough, but nothing new.

I nice short story with a lot of content packed into each chapter. While the writing style is good, there are no use of breaks or lines to separate content, which can cause some confusion when there are shifts in perspective during a chapter. Apart from that it is worth reading if you want a short fast paced story.Most important for me, is that it is a properly finished story, including an epilogue. A refreshing change from the usual “completed” stories due to hiatus or dropped content, usually ending on a cliffhanger to boot.

Rallying good novel. Caught my eye with its unique plot and chapters are really good. Looking forward to how it will develop further. Keep up with your good work!!

First thing, I love to applaud you with the concept. For me, it's new, unusual and I never heard of it before. The thing about sci-fictions today are the ideas seemed identical so reading your novel was refreshing to me. Another is I love how you already put distinctive traits for each character you presented which makes us readers easier to differentiate with them and note them individually. And what I like the most is how you lay the events perfectly that lead to string age. It helped put depth, add mystery and stir my curiosity. What I'd kindly suggest is apply flashback rather than descriptive explanation of the past(though, it's up to you especially if that's just your style) because I personally think it has more feels. Nonetheless, I had no problem with grammar or mechanics because I honestly didn't see errors on those. Ultimately, kudos! I really admire sci-fi writers because I believe they had the hardest time. Anyway, keep the fire in you burning!