Metaphorica and action mixed in perfection! The narration was at its finest and was a game maker in this novel. I am engrossed with a variety of words and my tongue feels like a poet dancing in the words whilst playing while I read. This is phenomenal, I got to read these kinds of novels to improve my vocabulary! Kudos! Quality at its finest!
The novel is okay but the MC is quite disappointing. i was going into the novel thinking that it was going to be about a alchemy store but it is not.
The mc barely sell anything out of his store and just has the guild do it at exterme discounts that make no sense.
The author says the MC get better after chapter 50 but the story turns into a op mc going dungeon raiding for the next 50 chapter and has nothing to do with the store.
Below is concept art of Emma the fox girl that first appeared in CHAPTER 003. Before writing, I have always liked to draw. Thus, will try to add more arts in the future.
most everything was average and cliche. That, in and of itself, isn't a bad thing, so long as the characters are well developed and the writing skillful.
Unfortunately, both the characters are writing quality are bad. The writing quality was mildly irritating, with the bad Grammer and exposition being handled very poorly.
The characters were by far the worst part of this book, and the reason I dropped it. The characters didn't feel one but like people; rather, they were one dimensional and seemed to lack any complexity or realism.
For example, the all men except for MC are villains, irresponsible, or lusty pigs. One girl (at the beginning) was the vain, big breasted onee-chan that instantly falls for the main character when he saves her. MC is a do gooder with a shop. He failed to be interesting, at least to me.
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The story is light, good to read, has great characters and don t have repetitive situations, I really recommend it. But I also notice that the author sometimes exaggerates in the description of scenarios and situations (he looks like an old man telling a story... he rambles!) ---------------- Author, me too I would recommend changing the cover, because despite being beautiful and well made, it gives us the idea of a natural medicine book, not a fantasy book (I don't say this as a review, just because I like the novel and think it has content enough to become popular)
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The mc barely sell anything out of his store and just has the guild do it at exterme discounts that make no sense.
The author says the MC get better after chapter 50 but the story turns into a op mc going dungeon raiding for the next 50 chapter and has nothing to do with the store.
Unfortunately, both the characters are writing quality are bad. The writing quality was mildly irritating, with the bad Grammer and exposition being handled very poorly.
The characters were by far the worst part of this book, and the reason I dropped it. The characters didn't feel one but like people; rather, they were one dimensional and seemed to lack any complexity or realism.
For example, the all men except for MC are villains, irresponsible, or lusty pigs. One girl (at the beginning) was the vain, big breasted onee-chan that instantly falls for the main character when he saves her. MC is a do gooder with a shop. He failed to be interesting, at least to me.
The story is light, good to read, has great characters and don t have repetitive situations, I really recommend it. But I also notice that the author sometimes exaggerates in the description of scenarios and situations (he looks like an old man telling a story... he rambles!) ---------------- Author, me too I would recommend changing the cover, because despite being beautiful and well made, it gives us the idea of a natural medicine book, not a fantasy book (I don't say this as a review, just because I like the novel and think it has content enough to become popular)