great story, love the idea of putting the readers comments and gifts into the story, I hope romeru updates this story soon, really loved lil zombie and I want to see him become the undead king that he was always meant to be
Okay! I read through the work. It was an amazing job you did there. Just the first and second chapters gripped me harder than I had previously imagined. Nice storyline and satisfying pace. Great one...
To all those readers who feel that the act of cooking, and washing dishes is an act of a beta mc, I'm afraid that this story may not be up to your taste. And could I please understand what your definition of beta mc is? Because I truly feel that our thoughts about this is a world of a difference apart. I personally hate the concept of a beta mc. For example, cases where a female character acts high and mighty in front of the mc, while ordering the mc to do things that is not beneficial to him. And the mc follows the instructions like a loyal dog. Yeah, I get it. I made two small scenes where the mc didn't want to wash his own dishes, or cook, but because of his sister's words, he followed through with it. Does this mean that he is now a beta mc?I don't know what you think, but in my personal opinion, regarding such small little matters, it doesn't even make a difference.Cooking and washing your own dishes are normal everyday stuff. Doing them won't kill anybody. But I understand that everyone have different thoughts and ideas, and some may be a bit too sensitive towards the topic of 'beta mc'. Or maybe you may argue that it is not the scale of his act that counts, but rather because he listens to his sister's every word. And you may also notice that in the later parts of the story, other than these two scenes, this case does not happen anymore. Honestly, I only wrote those two scenes as a joke, but I didn't expect that some readers would have such an adverse, immense reaction towards it
Writing Quality seems to have improved from when I started his other book, updating stability is amazing, there’s only 5 chapters out so I can’t really comment on the others so just take 4
This novel has me waiting for the next chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm glad I never had to go to a place like this. Crazy hotel but who is the killer.
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