I was initially interested in this novel, and I read to chapter 182. I enjoy reading slice of life system novels. However, this novel took a very weird turn.When the main character first got the system, the system told him that there wouldn't force him to do anything dangerous. However, all of a sudden there is now a life or death competition against other system holders? Wasn't this supposed to be a slice of life pet store novel? Why did it change so fast?Normally I wouldn't care all that much about this competition, but the problem is the main character literally has no reason nor motivation to participate in this. The only reason he is the owner of a pet shop is because his parents died, and so he wanted to take over. The reason the main character started capturing this mystical pets is basically, "why not?".Anyway, this story is pretty slow. The main character focuses on the mystical pets he has 100% of the time, why is kinda disappointing for a pet store owner that has 10 - 30 pets and only focusing on three of them. (So far) Normally in a story like this, you'd expect a lot of cute moments, because well, the main character owns a pet store. However, those are far and wide, nowhere to be seen. The story is extremely slow and repetitive, to the point of annoyance. However, this novel does have some good comedy. Like when the main character implied communism would be a good idea. The translation quality of this novel is pretty mid. Everything is understandable, but they randomly change the names of various characters/pets. It's extremely confusing because they literally have two different names for a character in a single chapter.Overall, the novel is decent, but the fact that the author drones on and on about random stuff really makes this novel too slow to bear. I am unsure why they put a action-plot in a slice of life novel, but whatever.
the pacing is kinda bad like i took 5to10chapters for like a week normally that's okay but the story felt supppeeeerrr slow like i felt i wasn't reading a novel but a 3hour guide to something but it only took like 5mins kinda got bored 😴😴😴 but is a good story nonetheless
One of the best out here.This novel really is a hidden gem. There aren’t many novels with characters as complex and well written like this one.Give it a try and you probably won’t regret
not bad, it's a story for a specific reader..... although I must say that the economy in the world where the mc is located suffers from a serious inflation problem and the ranks of power are all mixed up, if you ignore that and are the reader to whom this type of story is directed will be able to enjoy it
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Amazing!!❤️ I've read the starting and I can't wait to read what's next.The characters and everything is so beautiful designed and the idea is so fantastic! You've done a really good job. Keep it up!
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