Heir of Chaos: Mythic Magic

I really liked the world building and how the story starts, a good book.

Good setting and pacing. It's also engaging and unique. Nice few chapters in, so continue updating.

I would say, I agree to the whole comments. The amount of details and vivid description is insane! This definitely got me hook. I just read the chapter 1 and I can't wait to read more. Please everyone give this a try!

The first chapter will hook you so bad. The amount of content is also just so much. I like it so far

The story has a rich world building and amazing characters that are well thought out and developed!

The author possess a rich vocabulary and strong grammar skills, making the story an enjoyable reading experience.

If you guys have a little bit of time, I strongly recommend giving this novel a try!

I was reading this as a favor to the author but I must say I am incredibly impressed. The use of vivid imagery combined with just right amount of action keeps my interest throughout the entire prologue. I am curious to see this Ojero and what he us all about. But still, so far I am very impressed with his story telling and world building abilities. Well done. Just one critique, what does Lazarus look like?