Heartless Immortal

Wow. Just wow. I have absolutely no words. The author was incredible with the descriptive writing, I almost felt like I was there. Well done, keep up the good work.

well, the story passes the message but I would say a great job to the author, managing to get all characters in place and hoping to see more work than this in the future.

Could be so much better

I am currently enjoying the story although it’s still at it start if it goes on and develop i think there is a chance for this to become the new big thing. An importan thing that destroy many stories with “evil” mc is that the author becomes afraid and bit by bit turn him into a  generic good guy. [img=fp]

The story line of this book is all over the place. It isn’ constant at all.