Story HAD a potential. Where its gone, no one knows. From the way its written, to the plot holes(Sorry, but i can only see holes and no plot anymore), to the main character is nonsensical at best..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Although at the time of me posting this there are only 22 chapters, I have to say that I have really enjoyed it so far and am excited to see where it goes. 😁The story follows Otto who has gone back in time to when he first entered the Tower. As a fan of these climbing style novels it has everything I like: overpowered traits/classes, hidden piece collecting, a smart protagonist who makes use of everything available to him, and great battle scenes with the room for a lot of variation.A couple things I am really excited for: Otto training and assembling a team of kickass climbers, and seeing more of the tower that so far the author has only given us a small taste of.One things that slightly worries me: A common pitfall of these style of novels is when the MC + Team start acquiring insane amounts of abilities that in turn makes it hard to remember them / many of them quickly become useless. With the nature of the MCs class (which i won’t spoil) I feel this could get excessive really fast.. but for now i will trust the author!Despite there only being 22 chapters, each of them is meatier than 2 chapters of most books on this site, so dont hesitate to give it a try now! 😁
As the author, you have to be confident in your own story.So, let me give you the gist. A young man meets a suspicious old man, who ends up adding him to a chat group connected to various people throughout the whole universe. With this, he hopes to write his and his companions names into history, and to never be forgotten.By the way, this is sci-fi and cultivation, so if you're looking for mechs, mech suits, battleships and all that stuff, you'r in the right place. And if you're looking for cultivation, complete with realms, systems of cultivation and fancy titles, you're also in the right place.Enjoy!
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