He Left a Kiss on the Rose

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<p>Ms. Garcia looked at her for a minute, contemplating her reply. She sighed before replying.</p>

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

I said yep what a concept

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This! people! this is the Story about the System that you should definitely give a try! This story has a Fantastic Premise and unlike what the name suggests this is not the typical story about fantasy with System like power system. this is an actual Scifi story about Technology and how it can be used to do productive things and benefit Humanity.Though I love this story I can't help but see some typos and mistakes here and there along with a Strange choice of words that could be easily fixed. overall this story is easy to understand if you don't various appropriately placed scientific words.Since that mistake can be easily fixed and doesn't cause a major interruption to the story combine with my own limited knowledge of Grammar I think this one still deserves the five star on writing. give it a try and you will see how Great this story is.

Good read man, I like to sit with a good cuppa and just read my day away. Like on god did I not see it coming how many good butt stories I can find, but this one took a turn for the best and entertained me very well. That was a good read mr Author, please continue to give us the best you can as you go

This my first novel in webnovel, I hope you all enjoy

I don't know about how long will he searlize but the development of the story so far and all  Characters who appeared so far are good. loved it, and hope author continue to release chapters regularly.

very interesting webnovel, when I surd through the app, I try to find novels like these and they are amazing, this book is amazing, try it out, you will not be disappointed

I’m already on Chapter 5, and I can say that the story flow and character building are really good. However, I do get a bit confused when the narration shifts from 3rd POV to 1st POV.All in all, you should definitely give this story a try! :3

It's nice to see authors trying something different with inhuman MCs. Usually, the story starts with the protagonist dying and Reincarnating as some monster that needs to start leveling up in a jungle, but this one charts its own path.Liam is an insect-type protagonist and instead of us seeing him strive for survival in a wilderness, we start the story with him and his family and how their relationship works.I commend the author for going into detail about how Liam's family are quite devoted to his unusual needs. the challenges in raising him are perfectly expressed and for me that makes it easy to both sympathise with him and get attached to his family.I like the wholesome moments the story expels, though some of them seem to be leading to something ominous. In any case, if some tragedy were to happen... I'd definitely feel it.Great piece author!