Hated And Bullied By My Alpha Mate

the beginning of story was good. But then the mc got too arrogant. He is weak, and still sent his son to flaunt his strength.. And then the kingdom wars followed. It's too stupid.

I’m going to keep this short.Author forgets who died and the rules established for the MCs system.These two things alone ruin the immersion, but there’s more the cultivation levels are never really explained, the techniques are a little easy to get and if they usually are not seeing a bunch show up at auction should be sus.Just not really good, having a story centerered around an Auction house was a cool idea though

The writing is simple and somewhat easy to understand, comprehend, and imagine. Some sentences are long and take a lot of breath to read... but not bad and good overall.

Great story I like it a lot and I very much like the vr bit of the story

....is it 1v1? please tell me it's not a harem PLEASE!!!! I can't handle harems anymore please tell me it's just one couple. I'm begging someone spoil me ..........................................................................................................................................omg I did all this and I can't post does that mean I have to rate? ugh ok whatever

Five stars in every category because I strive for that level of authorship. The Dao of Storytelling is my goal. I plan to update at least one chapter a day. I plan to upload more on my days off of work, but I want quality of quantity. The length of my chapters varies, but I will not post anything under 2,000 words.There are very few grammatical errors and hopefully no misspellings. Paragraph comments with corrections are welcome.  The development isn't the typical fast cultivation road. I plan to write more detail and hopefully bring my characters to life in the story. First, though, there is an R-18 and Polgamy tag. Those are just elements that make up the whole story.  Not a harem seeker or a sex-addicted MC. No underage chicks and no legal lolis.The world background will become more expansive as the story evolves. Don't expect many info dumps as I like to tell the story instead of blatantly revealing the goal. I.e., "This is a kingdom-building journey" vs. " To return to the height of our ancestors, we will need an army."As for my MC, he has no cheats. He's born as a young master of a fallen clan. Yet, he maintains his maturity and the woes of his past life. He never wanted to reincarnate but comes to value his life and fights to succeed in his current life where he failed in the past.Well, that's it for now.

Writing the review for support. The story needs some work but it has some promise, looking forward to future developments, author!  .......

Hey dear author Your book resonated deeply with me, and I'm convinced it can inspire many more readers. I'd love to share some ideas on how to expand its reach and amplify its impact.May I have the privilege of discussing my thoughts with you?