14 chapters in but contradiction after contradiction and plot holes everywhere. I was working past some grammar issues but it’s the plot that’s a mess. First they don’t know she’s a Princess then randomly in the middle of a chapter he casually says she was lycan princess. It’s a mess and a no
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