Hōpeoj.

So began her long pregnancy as she tried her best to nurse her injuries and raise her child.

「...a, a bit...I feel a bit cold」

He knew that the woman beside him was volatile, and he wasn't about to challenge that while this man was in the room. He was brought for a meeting with Mr. Bold, so this man was more than likely him. He would have to tread lightly.

"I don't want her to see her brother became a waste."

"In the name of the father, and in the son and in the holy spirit... Amen - Good night everyone,and Goodbye." everyone said as we all finished the night prayers and as always everyone was ready to sleep. I close the light and open the lamps that was attached each side of the wall. the night is not silent nor good it's gloomy and senti. even I feel kinda weird I try my best to checked all the sleeping softies in their bed..

Judging by the hole in the satellite picture

I heard her say. I glance at her. She was hugging her knees while looking at the sky. She's so cute. With her green pajama, messy bun hair and both her lips and cheek are pink because of the cold weather.

I started reading this on a whim when i had a spare 5 min, hours later i finished devouring volume 1! I was very surprised with this story and obviously hooked from the start. The writing is great and just the way the story is told made just keep on reading. I have so much to say about this it's so hard to actually put in words lol Thank you writing this, and keep up the good work!

ALRIGHTY !!!                                              .

you can take my suggestion or avoid it. i think  the mc should  follow specific genre crime ,horror because it is more realistic and the mc will not became too op .when mc became op the quality hollywood type novel became very boring. every  movie he writes became sucess so it will repetietive .if he  moves to production house he should create producton house  like A24 which caters for independent movies.if the he writes  movie is bigscale he should coperate with big studio

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.