Seeing zai mushen's pure , innocent red ruby pupils princess yue's heart softened as she replied " come and sit on my lap and give a kiss a my cheek as you have hurt my heart "
Puis un autre coup de canon retentit mais cette fois-ci il était bien plus fort. Et à peine quelque seconde plus tard l'obus explosa au pied au pied du mirador. Le bois fut désintégré ainsi que le corps de Wil qui se transforma en un nuage de sang. Le mirador pencha avant de s'écraser au sol. Sludge réussi à en sortir quelque que seconde avant que le mirador touche le sol.
In his thousand lives, he was well-aware of the gods. He'd glimpsed them once or twice in the midst of transmigrating to a new world, and soul before being knocked out everytime as it was the last stage of transmigration. The gods were old, heaven was beautiful and bright. Creatures of all sorts dwelled, and sometimes, he caught their attention. He wondered how it looked like; many humans died each day, what did they see? What did HE look like? After seeing heaven many times, and being left with no answers to the same constant questions, he learned to ignore them.
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
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