How the fk is Mc 15 and every other side character they literally act like 10-13 years old at most.
And than there is the Fact that Mc turns put to be a Beta Simp at chapter 20 something that was so put if nowhere just because he has seen 1 goodlooking girl.
Amazing work. The writing quality is well above excellent, not too repetitive to feel boring and not too "purple-prose" to make the readers lose interest either.The story development is good, with the pace being a mix of slow and fast depending where it needs to be.The mc is intriguing and has a lot of potential. His motivations are simple and plain yet - to become a Magus. I wonder what it'll become when he achieves his current goal.The world, to be honest, is the one thing that has interested me the most. It's vast and full of all kinds of possibilities, and I can see that the author has a vision in its creation.A 5/5 start from me.
Great plot, explores a lesser used concept of magus that often is taken by just mages or cultivators which is nice and the stories is great sets up good background and world building and were and how powerful the character the character is and and isn't currently! Great Potential that keeps getting more and more drawn out and excited too see more of it!
On this whole platform this thing second only to Shadow Slave. It's a shame if people miss out on this. Get it to the top my friends! Great characters, worldbuilding, comedy, whatever you want. It has it!
While I might not have officially started the first chapter of this book yet, I have been there in the previous versions of it, and I can tell you for a fact that this author has amazing writing quality and the story is great and flows smoothly, and as far as I can remember there aren’t major info dumps every other chapter
Side note: author, if you ever want to delete this book again, can you please post a chapter saying why, cause I was so confused the last time you deleted it and had to stalk your account to find this
even though the MC has everything needed ... keep doing unnecessary things ... doesn't learn from his mistakes ...the author keeps forcing plots ... idk why... maybe for more words? or just has no clear plane for the novel...
anyway keep the hard work Author ... am sure you will do better in the future...
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And than there is the Fact that Mc turns put to be a Beta Simp at chapter 20 something that was so put if nowhere just because he has seen 1 goodlooking girl.
Side note: author, if you ever want to delete this book again, can you please post a chapter saying why, cause I was so confused the last time you deleted it and had to stalk your account to find this
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anyway keep the hard work Author ... am sure you will do better in the future...
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