Gravity Between Us

I responded and defended the idea of this Novel to someone else that left a really cruel review..... however, I kinda now regret making my defense towards the Novel....  1) My defense still sticks, I am poor, and disabled, so the whole concept of constant rewards for easy things and so easily finding treasures was something I can enjoy.... however, that now leads me to -> 2) I originally defended the Novel when I was only at ch 6. I barely started reading the Novel. Then 100's of chapters in, I realize that the Novel is nothing like the TAG "invincible" is suppose to mean.... the Author/Translator should have picked a better TAG than "Invincible

This is pure wish fulfillment.Badly done wish fulfillment.The MC is OP, which is expected, what is not expected is how ridiculously catastrophic the rest of the novel is.MC refuses to deal with things for unsatisfactory reasons, or no reasons at all. He is literally the biggest hypocrite imaginable.Assassin tries to kill him, so beat him, threaten his daughter, show him rape scenes of his employer's horrible deads and tell him to do better.Needmoney, go to the school beele, build up her company, start your harem, slap some people around.He, world best hacker/martial artist, but there is no money in it. Go needlessly complicate your relationship with the GF, a real 10, of the guy whose body you took over, by involving yourself with other women.Anyone who has read something like this will know the MC is a homewrecker with the power of a truck and the personality of wet rice.DO NOT RECOMMEND

it's good but it just seems so..............................................................................................................

Ngl, this is what i wanted! I love the story and especially the mc, Etc. I would love to see more of the nocel and yeah. I support ya!!! Looking forward to see more.

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Chapter 1 and they already get the MC's gender wrong 2 times if it gets better I might come back to it. ....................................

So I like the way the novel is written, but a little more description would help the audience connect with the world. Like set the scene before going into it, so the reader can imagine that scene behind the characters. Example would be two characters fighting... but you can give like even 3 lines of description on a jungle behind them, will allow the reader to place a jungle background behind then, rather than a plain white void. Also, the updates have stopped, I hope you will continue then soon

"Annoying Guy.