After sipping tea, Rika leaned back and looked at the quartet, "So, let's say I believe you. What do you hope to accomplish from this? Stop the outbreak from starting or what?"
No groom, no guest! God didn't favour me at all. The mansion is large but old. It has a dark and cold aura. The garden is dry, no flower, no green like it has been abandoned for several years.
" I really appreciate for it. I guess both of us really have a lot benefit by doing this. I'm looking forward doing more business with you in the future. " ( Irelia )
The story is interesting and has potential... I'm very intrigued by how the Hunter System would be as the story moves forward... However, the concept of the system itself needs a bit of background or introduction for readers who are not familiar and only starting to read system novels like me... Also, your book has so much dialogue, at least 75% I think. It kind of looks like a movie script or a manga / comic... It's not bad but when I try writing like that, I get a harsh rejection from my editor... "remember that you're writing a book not a script"... those are Webnovel's words from writing guidelines.
Next one what? Ghost system? Demon system? Frankenstein system? God system? Human system? Insect system? Religion system? Sin system? Farm system? Isekai system? Netore system?
Just stumbled upon it started reading and read through 154 trying find more chapter. Really like the development. Waiting for more chapters.Great book if you looking for fun read.
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