Graeae: Land of beauty and nightmares

I read first few chapters and I am already hooked. I am really looking forward to read more chapters. The story is very captivating. Keep up the good work author

Alright, shamelessly putting a 5 star review. If you liked my story, i hope that you will review it and add to your library. This is my first story, and i know it has flaws.

I have planned for more chapters. Will write and post them periodically.

Thank you.

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Great story. Very very interesting. Love the ML, he is kind and very smart for his age. keep it up author, looking forward to more chapters.

The world-building is nice, and the MC is solid. Overall, the book really gives off the vibe of another land, and it pretty much captures the surrealness of that said world. Just a minor tweak though, you can lessen the paragraph division so the readers won't be encouraged to skip through the dialogues. Adding a couple more words on a sentence said by a certain character will really help with engagement... not too much though since that would bore the readers.

I tend to in the opposite spectrum where I make all my paragraphs longer... and that's a bad habit I couldn't get out of my system. You're writing style is fresh, you just have to make it smoother.

An interesting read overall, definitely sticking around for more ^_^

Can't wait for more chapters. Keep on writing!!!
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There are some writing issues but other than that, its amazing. Definitely creative, havent seen something like this on WB before and will be adding it to my library