Graeae: Land of beauty and nightmares

To be honest ...the flow of the story seemed fast yet at a good pace. There are some words here and there that are misspelled and some words I am unfamiliar with(like Sylphear is a god I have never heard of... unlike undine or Garuda whom I am familiar with). But if I have to say...they are not a big flaw at all since this story sucked me into it so much more than I expected it to. It was a really fun read

I'm gonna be true about this review.

First the writing quality: 3
It was well performed how you described the setting and characters. However, the way you write verb scenes, such as battle scenes, is awful. Additionally, your paragraph structure was unclear.
Example:
The beast lunged in his front with its club swing. Victor ducked down under it and dashed forward faster than the eye could see. He tore off both of its legs with a single slash. The ogre fell face forward.,

The paragraph itself is fine, but the construction is awful. Additionally, if you consistently use a word like lunged, a new reader will find it unclear (which is you can just use the word hopped, leaped, or jumped)

Updating stability: 5 updates a day
Story development: 4 its good for now
Character design: 4 since the paragraph structure was bad
Worldbuilding: 5. too early to say so just support

Second shameless review!!

After writing more than a hundred chapters and being contracted, I felt I should do a review and say what I think about the book.

Q. Will there be a harem?

A. I have added multiple female leads to the story now and they all have things going on in their lives. Sophia and Marigold are traumatised and Kivela is trying to find her place in the world. Osmond also is rather young now, so I don't know.

Q. Is the book dark?

A. Yes it is. I have given warnings at the beginning of dark chapters.

Q. Will there be a system?

A. I have not added the tag because the story as of now, doesn't have a system. But I am planning to bring a character with a reincarnated character with a system in the future, so I guess I should add those tags.

Q. Writing quality?

A. I am a writer who has just started. English is not my first language. I am improving every day and with every word I write. And with that, I also have found out that my initial chapters are bad compared to the latest ones. So I am planning to go back and edit the whole thing once volume one is completed.

Q. When will volume one be completed then?

A.  It's in the last arc now. I am planning to write five volumes for this book if everything works accordingly.

Q. Chapter update?

A. I try to update one chapter a day. I am currently writing with my mobile and it is a hastle.

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Even though you said this is ur first work I am at a loss because this is so good. Hope the author to keep going and give these lovely readers morr and more. lots of love ❤️

Very nice and interesting story l must say.... I also liked the way ML is... He is really cool....
Also liked the author's writting skill..... Its look like a professional...
Looking forward to the next chapters..

This book is really totally amazing and totally worth reading